My first installation video, any suggestions please.

[drivesafe]

Hi folks, I am after some assistance.


I have just completed my first dual battery installation video, for an L322 Range rover kit.


I would really like any suggestions and/or criticism about the video.


I need to make two more as quick as possible so any help to improve them would be greatly appreciated.


Regards, Tim.


https://youtu.be/kFFt6C-0qZQ

[POD]

I would lose the promotional material from the start of the video, presumably the installation video is aimed at a person who has already bought one. Try and improve the lighting during things like the trim removal. I assume that the power cable to the rear panel is live battery positive during the installation; with a video obviously aimed at the inexperienced owner-installer, might be worth mentioning the importance of not touching the tool to any bodywork whilst removing & installing the power cable. When you said to start the engine, showing a hand turning the key was just dead time. It might be worth mentioning as you pull things apart, which parts will not be going back in.
That's all from me.
BTW, I'm still waiting for you to reply to an email from about 5 years ago.