Thread: tried to be a little artistic

you didn't do the inside of the tyres

nice bit of elbow grease there with the car polish.

they always look a treat with a bit of spit and polish.

Slight problem with an evening shot, the best light is either quickly disappearing or it is gone. Some fill in flash may have put some more colour back into the sky.

Originally Posted by weeds

you didn't do the inside of the tyres

Trust you to see it

Originally Posted by slug_burner

nice bit of elbow grease there with the car polish.

they always look a treat with a bit of spit and polish.

Slight problem with an evening shot, the best light is either quickly disappearing or it is gone. Some fill in flash may have put some more colour back into the sky.

Thanks mate . Very much a novice at the camera thing so will be taking all advice on board .

Can be tarted up a bit...


As mentioned the lights a bit poor and the sky is blown out. But nice work with the polish and worth a picture.

Is it on the station platform?

also your horizon looks like it needs an ever so slight tilt as it doesn't look quite right to me.....and think about your surroundings would of been a much nicer shot if you moved around a touch and took out that telegraph poll...and included more of the station

well you asked for a critique:

1. Background. Kills the shot. If you can't get the car out of the carpark then move it around until as much distracting background is out of the way as possible. The phone/lec lines are easy to remove so don't worry about them.

2. Lighting. It's flat light, not ideal so if there is a choice get a 3/4 lit view in late evening light. But, better than mottled light under the trees at midday.

3. Angle. Every car has a sweet spot for angles, and that one isn't it for the Discovery. Try walking away from it, zooming in and getting low down. Being low down also means you can more easily mask the background behind the car. A little steering lock, usually "away" from the camera also helps at times. This car has some points of interest on the front so I'd emphasise the front more than the side which has nothing remarkable.

4. Good point; the ground. It's not too dark so some light is reflected and the underneath isn't blacked out.

5. The sky is lifeless no matter what trickery you pull with flashes so compose the shot so the sky doesn't matter, ie filling the frame with the car. Given the car is red it will stand out nicely against the sky and the sky colour becomes an advantage; if it was a white or silver car you wouldn't do that because it'd blend in and look silly.

6. If you used flash as you've just polished it you'd be likely to end up with a bright spot in the paintwork unless you have some sort of diffuser or reflector. So I wouldn't bother for that shot.

hope that helps.

Originally Posted by dm_td5

Can be tarted up a bit...


As mentioned the lights a bit poor and the sky is blown out. But nice work with the polish and worth a picture.

Is it on the station platform?

Hi DM . It's on the loading(industrial) side of the station where Elmo is sitting and the passenger train side is behind the disco on the other side .

Ok I took this pic at the same time on a different angle ........



Ilike this next one but is a little blurry